Sunday, January 8, 2012

January 8 - A Lost Book of the Iliad

Fair warning, this is long.  As in broke my English Teacher's record for longest paper ever turned in.  It was 14.5 pages.  Please enjoy the lost book 25 of the Iliad: The Death of Achilles!



So the bronze-armored Achaeans massed at the foot of their ships
Awaiting the command of Achilles to send them into battle again,
Shining divine under the rosy halo of the morning sun,
Writhing impatiently like the Hellespont behind them.
And there stood swift-footed Achilles,
Son of Peleus, he called out to every Achaean –
“Comrades come!  Their time is up!
Brothers-in-arms, call up your fury once more,
We must win high glory; glory to be sung of for years to come.
Let no one say they saw a single Achaean fall back from battle,
Fearing to loose their lives.  Come forth and lock together,
Let Troy see their fault in rousing the lion-hearted Achaeans!”

And hearing the command of high-hearted Achilles,
Each man rose up and surged towards the chariots with fire in their hearts.
A mass of bronze and horsehair crests, eager and ready for the assault on Troy itself.
Chariots stood wheel to wheel, positioned as their captains had decreed
Horses tossing their heads, men shouting
Ready to repay the Trojans for the theft of white-armed Helen, Menelaus’ queen.
And Achilles lord of men again took the lead,
Standing on the hill of the encampment he let loose a war cry
Echoed by every shining Achaean sweeping like a flood towards the walls of Troy.
As the chariots drew closer to the walls of Troy,
The embodiment of man-slaughtering Ares
The Trojans massed on the walls, afraid to leave their unconquerable citadel
Men and women alike looking down upon the dazzling Achaeans
Afraid for the fate that awaited them.
The women, running from the walls to hide themselves from some stray Achaean arrow,
Ran into the streets crying out for the children to bring their husband’s and father’s armor,
Hoping that the Trojan bronze would spare them the fate that awaited every Trojan man.
Priests and men rushed to pour out cups to Zeus, father of gods and men,
Noble women gathered the most valuable treasures and brought them to the temple of Pallas Athena.
Every man prayed to the distant deadly Archer to save his beloved Troy from its fate.
Among the clamor the call rang out, the longhaired Achaeans had arrived.
So many men, all thirsty for blood and war,
Eager to send the Trojan men down to the House of Death.
Their war cries rang out against the strong, high walls of Troy,
Taunting the Trojans to fire the first shot from their stronghold
From the well-built walls that had protected them for so long.
Surely they thought, no man would be foolish enough to try to take the walls
Called unconquerable for so long by so many men
Odysseus, great glory of the Achaeans, drew his bow and let loose the first shot
Hitting it’s mark, piercing straight though the breastplate of Pedasus, son of Bucolion.
Blood gushed forth from his heart as he fell from the great walls of his city
His head, bashed open inside his crested helmet when he hit the ground
His blood soaking into the dust at the foot of the wall
Running like a river past the feet of the horses, planting their feet in the now muddy earth.

The horses immediately trampled each body that fell at the point of an Achaean arrow,
Blood flowing in rivers through the earth, covering the Achaean chariots and horses
Enticing the vultures circling overhead.
And here was Aesepus, drawing his bow from the top of the walls,
Raining down arrows on the horsehair crests of the Achaeans
One piercing the heel of Aeacides, his comrades watched him fall from his chariot
As that same chariot which had conveyed him into battle for these ten years
Rolled over his head, dashing his brains across the earth.
Achilles, too watched Aeacides fall, aiming an arrow at Aesepus
Sending him falling to his death at the feet of the Achaean horses.
Ajax here, hefted his great spear at Ormenus watching it pierce his bowels as they spilled forth
He fell too, over the walls of troy, raining blood upon the Achaeans
In turn, raining arrows and spears upon the Trojans
As if to be the specter of Ares, sacker of cities, curse of men.
And here was Odysseus, covered head to toe in the blood of the Trojans he had killed
A wild force, god-like, he loosed arrows from his great bow that no other man could draw
First fell Pammon, son of Priam, with a great cry he fell from the city walls like a tree
Recently felled for his brother’s funeral pyre.
Then Epistrophus, his Halizonians crying out for their leader as he fell to meet his fate.
And here was Achilles, son of Peleus, breaker of horses, high commander of the Myrmidons.
Each arrow he shot met its mark, embedded in the chest of a Trojan.
No man was safe from him, his spears too sending men over the edge,
Sending them crashing down to the hooves of the Achaean horses,
Tempting the vultures and the dogs waiting at the edge of the Trojan plain for their feast.
Here fell Epicles, great Lycian second only to the dead Sarpedon.
Here fell Polites, son of Priam, backwards into Troy itself
Saving him the fate of so many of his comrades,
To be mangled and trampled at the hands and wheels of the Achaeans.

And Phoebus Apollo, standing on, watched man-killing Achilles
Slaughtering his beloved Trojans, knowing he could not save them from their fate.
Watching Achilles, the glow of his divine armor dulled by the splatter of blood from below.
Watching the Trojans running from the walls like frightened deer,
Trying to hide themselves from the deadly arrows of the Achaeans
Praying in vain to gods that would not allow themselves to hear.
Watching Ucalegon running through the palace, seeking out the private rooms of Paris,
Running through the halls of Priam’s great palace, past the noble women,
Pouring out cups to Zeus and pleading him to take mercy on their city
Desperate for some divine intervention they pleaded as though mourning the death of their city not yet dead.
And so he found Paris and pleaded supplicant before Paris –
“O Paris!  Dear prince, don’t hide yourself in here!
We all shall meet our doom at once, desecrated at the hands of the Achaeans!
We shall be overcome by swift-footed Achilles, gigantic Ajax, and Odysseus, the great glory of the Achaeans.
If only we were as beloved of the gods as the Achaeans!  Our prayers might not fall on deaf ears!
These men have robbed our women of so many sons and fathers!
Repay their women, safe at home, in kind!
Join our men on the ramparts; send your own arrows down into the Achaean forces!
Avenge your brothers!  They were not afraid to join the men, Polites, Pammon, Hector, and countless others have died for Troy!
And yet you continue to hide in your rooms, here with Helen.
You are a curse upon your city, sending so many men to the House of Death
Rescue the men and women of Troy!
Don’t let all the glory fall into the hands of the great, strong-greaved Achaeans!”

So Paris went to his window and looked out upon his people, a mass of grief and all marked for death,
Seeing women tearing their hair, in grieving for their dead sons and husbands
Watched priests on their knees, the smoke of sacrifice filling the air
As they tried to bring some blessing from the gods and Fate towards Troy.
And Ucalegon burst out genuflected and grief-stricken –
“Paris, pity your father!  Look at him, among the people!
He has lost yet more sons today, and still may lose others!
Go forth!  Avenge the death of your brave brothers!
Merciless, unyielding prince, join the men!
How can you yet stay here in your rooms? 
If you do not join the troops, no one will mourn you on your pyre!
No one will remain to say ‘that was Paris, breaker of horses, prince of Troy’!
We will all have been lost!
O Paris, Go forth and beat back these savage men from our walls!
Be the hope of Troy!  Or forever be known as the man whose cowardice killed Her.”
So Paris seeing the people weep, drew Ucalegon to his feet
And left Helen in their rooms to weep for both her loves.
Running now through the palace he gathered his armor
of shining bronze and readied himself for battle.
And Apollo watched him as he donned the heavy bronze armor,
Wrapping his legs in heavy greaves, strapping on the shining breastplate,
Setting on his head his powerful helmet, the shine of the bronze
A halo around his head in the afternoon sun,
The horsehair crest bristling as he shook his head to ensure it was secure.
He took his bow down from its place holding it in his hands as if to weigh it
A gift from Lycia, made of strong cedar native to that land,
Made to be the strongest, surest bow in Troy.

Paris walked from the palace through the streets of Troy,
The mourners parted to let him pass; looking at the man they had had to convince to fight,
The man who now was supposed to be their great hero.
Women with tears running down their faces looked at him through their hands and hair
Clawing at their faces and scalps, begging of the gods to tell them,
Why had it been their man who died at the hands of the Achaeans?
Men too, covered in dust and sweat looked at Paris,
Knowing that they would now follow him into battle instead of man-killing Hector.
And Paris turned to them, his cry rousing the men once again for battle –
“Trojans!  Brothers-in-arms of Priam’s sons!
Call once more upon your battle fury!
Rise and defend our Scaean gates!
We must once again defend the city of Tros, our home!
We must win high honor for Priam and his royal sons!
Let the Achaeans see how mad they are to attack the great city of Troy!”
He ended his cry and each swift Trojan once again put on his armor,
Their own battle cries adding to the ringing tumult of voices within the Trojan walls.

Apollo, as soon as he saw Paris rallying, took on the character of high-hearted Dius,
Son of Priam and brother of Paris, armed like Paris, Apollo joined him at the front of the lines:
“Paris, beloved of Apollo, hope of the Trojans,
Lay hand to bow.  Beat back the Achaeans from our walls.
You know the truth to be this.  You must kill swift-footed Achilles,
Look at him!  How he lays waste to our people.
Our mother and father have implored you to take aim at the son of Peleus.
It will give heart to our comrades and strike such a blow to the Achaeans
That no man thinks they will return to battle
Lacking he who is called the Best of the Achaeans.”

Paris, turning on his brother, helmet flashing, replied:
“Dius, what you say is true.  Achilles must die.
He has killed brilliant, man-killing Hector,
And we have seen how the Achaean ranks fall when he leaves the field of battle.
But still, he is the greatest fighter of the Achaeans.
His spear has felled many of my brothers and brothers-in-arms.
Each arrow he shoots follows a straight course into the chest of a Trojan,
Sending him instantly to the House of Death.
I cannot kill this man!”

Apollo, beguiling Paris masterfully as he had tricked many men, pled –
“Paris put away your fear!  The distant deadly Archer has
Long shown his preference for Troy.
You yourself poured out a cup to him before you entered battle
Ask him now to guide your arrow swift and true.
Stir your spirit.  Now fight!  Fight and kill for Troy!”

With that Apollo left Paris’ side and ran swift-footed to the halls of Olympus
Where his father, Zeus, sat, enthroned in his great hall
Watching the Trojans once again mounting their defense,
And once again meeting the points of the Achaean arrows head on
Falling in great numbers from the walls, meeting their doom at the foot of the walls
Of Troy, meant to protect them from harm,
Once again mudding the earth of the Trojan plains
Watched as Achilles, once again losing arrows, breaking through men, leaving
In his wake, the sons and husbands of Troy, left to await Hermes the conductor of men.
Each arrow meeting its mark with deadly accuracy,
Spilling the blood from the heart of every man they hit,
Sending them to meet their fate under the horses and chariot wheels of the Achaeans.
And Achilles, taking aim, let loose an arrow,
Speeding towards the breastplate of Dius, son of Priam,
It hit, taking Dius to his knees, clutching the arrow whose sharp point
Pierced his heart, clouding his eyes with the black haze of death,
Sending him pitching downward, head first to meet the blood-muddy earth surrounding the walls of Troy.
Falling, regal, like a bull meant for sacrifice to Apollo himself
Giving out a last bellow as Paris turned to see his brother meet his fate
Crashing to the ground, his blood spilled out from his armor
His head dashed open before Achilles’ chariot, spraying the horses with blood.

And Zeus, the father of men and gods, spoke out –
“Alas!  His fate is sealed now!  Achilles, son of Thetis with the glistening feet,
He shall meet his doom at the hands of Paris.
My heart grieves for her son, he who never failed to pour out a cup to we immortal gods,
Now on the bloody plain of Troy he shall meet his fate,
So far from his home, the halls of Peleus.
Look now, Paris sees the death of his brother and is enraged.
Immortals all, gather, shall I spare him, Achilles son of Thetis?
His mother is dear to me, she who saved me, she who protected Dionysus,
She with the glistening feet, should I save the man for her sake?
Or let him meet his fate?
                                                But Phoebus Apollo,
Protested, eyes wide:  “Father, lord of men and gods,
How can you say such things?  The fates have long decreed that this
Man will die on the plains of Troy, and you think to
Defy them?  You’d let him return to Peleus’ halls?
Not one of the deathless gods would deny what you owe to Thetis,
But not one of us will ever praise you if you choose to save Achilles.”

And wide-seeing Zeus, son of Kronos, replied:
“Fear not, Apollo, divine twin, forever young,
I do not mean to save the man, though his mother is so dear to me.
Believe me, I would never cross the wills of the Fates. 
Now, go.  Urge Paris to fulfill his fate. 
Guide his arrow straight and sure.  Hold back no more.”

And so Apollo, the distant deadly Archer, leapt to his feet,
And rushed down from the hallowed halls of Olympus
To the walls of Priam’s great city.

And Paris ran towards the sight of his brother’s death
The blood already dry in the afternoon sun.
Looking down towards the body, crushed under the hooves of Achilles’ horses.
Lamenting he called out: “O Dius!  Now you
Go down to the House of Death. Like so many of our brothers,
Now you join them in the Halls of Hades!
Tell me, how will our mother and father lament your death!
They have lost so many, the best, of the strongest hearts and god-like characters!
Mestor, Lycaon, Hippodamas, Hipponous,
Hector of the glinting helmet, breaker of horses,
And now you!  All felled by the Achilles, son of Peleus!
How many more must they lose to this man?
Look how he charges across the corpses of our men!
Has he no sense to avoid them?
What glee does he take in killing Trojans, in desecrating their corpses
As he did to my dear brother Hector,
Immortal gods be praised for preserving his body and returning him home.
And now one more falls from our walls!
No, no more!  By this arrow, and with the distant deadly archer’s blessing,
I will put aside my fears.”

And Paris drew back his powerful bow and let lose the single arrow,
Its sharp point piercing the air as it sped on its course,
Indeed guided by Phoebus Apollo, towards Achilles
Its course straight and true, meeting its mark in Achilles’ throat.
As a hunter fells a deer, that animal graceful until its last moments
It falls to the ground eyes cast up as if to ask the gods to spare it –
So now as Achilles fell to the ground before the Scaean Gates,
Pitching his head towards the skies, begging Zeus
Or his mother Thetis to save him once again.
Poor doomed man, doomed by fate to win his glory and to die
Far from the land of his father, to fall on a hostile plain,
His life cut short by his glory and his wrath.
O sing muses!  Sing how this man died, calling out to his comrades:
“Odysseus, Ajax, comrades, brothers-in-arms! 
Hear me now!  I have known well the fate I see before me now.
I was always to die on this field of battle, far from home,
From my mother’s embrace and from my father’s hallowed halls.
Never could I have cheated fate by returning home so many weeks ago.
No my homecoming was denied to me at birth.
A burial in the lands of my forefathers was never to be mine.
And I meet my death freely, it is now my time.
The divine scales have tipped against me at last.
Hector spoke the truth when he said I would fall at the hands of
Paris and Apollo at the feet of the Scaean Gates.
But comrades, know this!  My death is not in vain.  Persist!
Continue to fight, and you shall reap great rewards.
Troy shall fall at the command of greathearted Odysseus, sacker-of-cities.
For all their fight and Apollo’s blessing, nothing, no one
Can save them from the hands of fate!”

And so Achilles fell before the Gates, his comrades powerless to help him.
Flying free of his body,
The great soul of god-like Achilles flew down to the House of Death,
Joining Patroclus and so many more Achaeans who fell round the walls of Troy.
His fate sealed and fulfilled, his earthly body lying,
Sprawled at the feet of his brothers-in-arms.
And the cry went up on all sides.
Tears and lamentations of the Achaeans, mourning their lion-hearted champion.
Celebration on the side of the Trojans,
Hailing Paris as the man who had killed the slaughterer of men,
Long-likened to Ares himself.
Though they had not long left, the Trojans rejoiced in their one hope:
The Death of Achilles and the promise of Paris.

And, from the gods on high, silver-footed Thetis cried out in woe:
“O my son!  Your fate has truly come to pass!
You who were greater than your father, who have spurred the Achaeans on
To bring Troy their fate.  Cursed from birth!
Granted the glory of the ages for the price of your
Proper burial and longed for homecoming!
O why did I bear you?  My beloved son, taken from me too soon!
Achilles, breaker of horses, you are lost to me forever!”

And the Achaeans surged around the body of Achilles, saving it from
the dogs and from the Trojans.  They carried it back to the ships.
This was the body of Achilles the best of the Achaeans. 
One who had led his Myrmidons, nay the Achaeans, into battle
Fearlessly from the dawn of the Trojan War.
Achilles, son of Peleus and Thetis, demigod in his own right,
Buried in a land not his own, buried far from the hallowed halls of his father,
On the plains of Troy the Achaean army lighted his funeral pyre
On the same place where Patroclus had been buried only days before.
Their cries rang out as his funeral games were illuminated by the light of his own pyre.

And so buried was Achilles, breaker of horses, lord of men, god-like warrior.

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